Oh dear …

Standard

I can’t make the calculation exactly as this is an audiobook, but I’d say about 17 clichés per square foot.  And please, please Ms Chadwick, do consider that larding your text with archaic vocabulary does not confer cultural authenticity on your characters.

It’s probably kinder not to say any more about this one.  But like other top celebrities, William Marshal is paying a stiff price for fame.

Yeah, right...

 

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